West High Best Tie

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This design I made is fairly solid, but as usual, there are a few things that could be fixed…

I think this design came off as a bit busy because the graphic was so repetitive. To remedy this, I would make the graphics a bit simpler. Furthermore, the letters and numbers are too big and thus compete with the headline in the hierarchy of text on the page. I think making them a bit smaller would help the page look less busy as well. Lastly, I would edit these photos, because they all have a very yellow hue which also adds to how busy the page looks- this yellowish color combined with the yellow-orange text and headline results in a design that is overwhelming for the reader. There are too many warm colors, so editing the photos would help immensely.

That’s all for today!

Simran

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